What people said after reading Chapter 1...

  • "I liked the setup. It suggests various conflicts... between Cody and Octavia, Cody and his own self-doubt, and possibly with the company itself."

    Stacy

  • “The job interview scenario was relatable. I connected with the anxiety, competition, and uncertainty portrayed.”

    Kaiden

  • "The opening line creates intrigue and tension. It suggests Octavia's entrance is a pivotal moment, hooking the reader from the start."

    Jason

  • "Cody and Octavia's back-and-forth chat and exchange of resumes shows that even in a competitive setting, there's still a chance for real connections to happen."

    Javi

  • “This opening was engaging, well-paced, and sets up multiple directions for the story to develop. I want to read Chapter 2 and find out how the interview went.”

    Micah

  • "I liked Cody. Despite his anxiety, he engages with Octavia respectfully, acknowledging her qualifications. This adds depth to his character, showing his vulnerability and honesty."

    Kirsten